The phenomenon of bullying is widely spread all across the planet and reaches epidemic proportions. People of different ages, social statuses, nationalities, and races act violently towards the other individuals.
I would clean it up—get straight to the point. You establish kairos at the end when you say that people are committing suicide because due to cyber bullying.
You might want to introduce this earlier in your introduction to really get people invested in your topic. And if your audience is just recent graduates, what can they do about this issue?
The claim is that students who cyber bully should be suspended. While this claim is very specific, I think it might be took specific.
I think ultimately, it prevents and discourages bullying, so instead you might want to say something along those lines.
If so, how does that connect to your body paragraphs? I feel like the evidence should be a kind of preview of your following argument rather than just another reason for your claim.
Maybe you could say something about how cyber bullying is just as real and harmful as other bullying? Like I just said, I think you should use evidence for your claim that ties the bodies paragraphs together. The one thing I have to say about your organization is that you should put 2.
Also, I might put your first close to the refutation… I just get the feeling that those would also nicely transition. These sources seem good. Maybe say how the fact that girls are bullied more online shows that this is a big problem?Examples of Materials That Can Be Adapted For Therapy a collection of resources by Judith Maginnis Kuster.
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Bullying a Social Issue Bullying a Social Issue Have you ever heard about Amanda Todd, a 15 years old Canadian girl who took her life away, on October , because of cyber bullying. Before her suicide, Amada decided to post a video telling her story about how she was blackmailed, physical and psychological abused.
An example of a severe case of cyber-bullying took place in , it shocked most people in the U.S.A. into understanding what cyber-bullying is when Megan Meier, a year old girl from Missouri, committed suicide in her room. I am an adult who was cyber bullied. I felt helpless against it.
The sad thing is the bullying is happening to me not directly but indirectly there's an e-mail address that was created I believe in using my name by someone or a group of people my REAL WORLD EX Girlfriend knows from Myspace.
Bullying has been in existence for many years, and this journal article examines the history of the problem and how bullying expanded to include cyber bullying as technologies changed. It also includes suggestions for preventing cyber bullying.
Since cyber-bullying issues are more likely to happen at schools, social networking, and mobile phones; Teachers, principals, and parents are responsible for monitoring, preventing, and punish cyber-bullying.